for cristian:
First off, the first sentence is a fragment. Other than that, I think this is fine. I would like you to explain what the other two ministries in 1984 do. Nice use of comparisons in par. 7.
for ebone:
I congratulate you for picking a challenging book for this assignment. I find it interesting that back then women sometimes held top jobs. I have to ask if the notes at the end of the book are useful?
for victor:
Can you post the questions at the top like the assignment says? I think that it's good to describe what autism is because the reader can understand why the character is doing all this stuff. I find it astounding that he knows immediately what 251 times 864.
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